TLC by Chrouya
Script: PhotoKano 07  on workpad
Workraw: PhotoKano_07.mkv

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This is the moment when one of the endless possible realities actually becomes reality.{The moment when only one of the heap of possible realities became true.}
{this line appears in the previous episode}

41
It happened when I came across Sanehara Hikari eating alone.
It happened when I came across Sanehara Hikari eating all alone.
{I feel there's a bit more feelings when it comes to "hitori sabishige ni" --> lonely on her own}

48
{It's because }I have a small mouth.
I just have a small mouth.
{more context related}

57
It's good...
Bleh...
{mazu(i) means it's bad, not good}

60
The "shi" which becomes the attributive form is actually even one below this.{um, tlc this passage please, I have no idea what she's talking about -alta}{I don't have time to look at TLC, so all up to the actual TLC this week!}
The attributive form "shi" is actually the one from below as well.
{This is about the irregular auxiliary verb "ki" in classic Japanese}

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"Shi" is "se", "maru", "ki", "shi", "shika", "maru".
The conjugation of this "shi" is: "se", -, "ki", "shi", "shika", -.
{mizenkei/renyokei/shushikei/rentaikei/izenkei/meireikei}
62
In the past tense, there's only the attributive form of the auxiliary verb "shi",
The attributive form "shi" is the only possible past-indicating auxiliary verb,
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so in other words, it has the same meaning as the past tense of the auxiliary verb "ki".
so in other words, this attributive form is actually derived from the past-indicating auxiliary verb "ki".
{http://www.classical-japanese.net/Grammar/past.html}

76
Since you're agreeing, you should smile so I can capture your smiling face as well.{.While you're agreeing, smile a bit. I'd like to photograph your smiling face, too.}{tlc, カット?}
Since you're agreeing, I'd like to shoot a picture of your smiling face as well.
{I believe that in english, a  katto/ "cut" can still mean a photo}

94
I'm in the photography club, but I'm here helping you.{now I'm here because of you!}
First of all, I'm in the {\i1}Photography{\i0} Club, and secondly I'm currently here to help you!
{I'd phrase it like this, since it's not really a "but" and slightly pissed at such a dumb question xD}

141
I was worried since she doesn't want to photograph people, but...{( ﾟ‿ ﾟ) -alta}{well, I wouldn't want to SHOOT people either}
I was worried since she has no intention to photograph people but...{( ﾟ‿ ﾟ) -alta}{well, I wouldn't want to SHOOT people either}
{I feel like this should be stronger}


179
If it's you, we might be able to do it...{tlc please -alta}
I don't really mind, but you'll owe us.
{kashi wo tsukuru: become owed/lend}

201
This time we'll cooperate and lift her spirits, meow!{tlc, not sure about what 盛り上げる is referring to here -alta}
{Because moriageru is transitive and not intransitive in this case, they are lifting someone's spirits, so this is correct translation}

205
I have a bad feeling about this.
I have a really bad feeling about this.
{emphasis because ~shika nai construction}

214
I managed to take some good ones of Maeda-senpai's war face!{luck!}{I don't even know}
I managed to take some good ones. Maeda-senpai, I wish you best of luck!
{these are two sentences. this girl is only shooting pictures of the havoc xD}

220
It's a meow photo opportunity!
It's a photo meowpportunity!
{just for lulz}

250
It took longer than expected so I wasn't able to take care of it.
I couldn't put this thing away so I took longer than expected.
{I think the case here is that he needs to bring it with him to the park, but you can't really stuff it away easily}

258
Even though I'm spending time with you, will I lose the ticket price?{TLC}
Even though I'm having fun right now, you'd still make me regret buying a ticket?
{ I think the context is like this. She's here to have fun, and he's making a fuss about it. Makes her think why she's even here}

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They had no interest in me before that.
We started talking about fashion, music and the like.
=>
We started talking about fashion, music and the like I had no interest in before.
{this is the correct context}

308
But to them, I was just {\i1}that{\i0} girl.{a convenient human being.}
{the only qualm of this edit is that tsugou no ii means "convenient" which is hard to put in this line of course}

309
I'm sure they just wanted someone they could rule over.{They probably just wanted someone to act superior on.}{tlc please -alt
I'm sure they just wanted someone close they'd feel superior over.
{not too far off, so just an alternative}